AMS Mekatronic is an R&D company, founded to develop mobilization devices based on innovative ideas for physically disabled people, to increase their quality of life and their ability to move.

A good statement of purpose. I’d shorten it to read:

AMS Mekatronic develops mobilization devices that increase the quality of life and ability to move for physically disabled people.

There’s no need to say R&D company or innovative ideas—they’re embedded within this statement already. You can’t really do this kind of work without them. This new way of saying it is easier to remember and repeat. It also perfectly says what they do. 

via Tek RMD – AMS Mekatronik

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